February

[intjonathan]

wet snow falls quickly
layered rain accumulates,
wet shoes walk sadly

Comments

haiku chain

[fieria.livejournal.com]

Seasonal mingling
weaving warmth with icy wind
duel element burns

Re: haiku chain

[niralisse.livejournal.com]

did you mean dual
native tongue should not be hard
for writer like you

Re: haiku chain

[fieria.livejournal.com]

couldn't fit dueling
abbreviation seemed best
I laugh at spellcheck

Do the 'ku

[huggybee.livejournal.com]

I think he meant the
spelling of the word dual
look again and see.

Re: haiku chain

[fieria.livejournal.com]

Y'know, this is what they used to do for fun in Chinese courts--dueling haikus where one person would fire a poem off, and people scrambled to come up with a witty reply.