done remembering

[intjonathan]

Someone
Stop my hands from shaking
I hurt and my spine's conducting lightning
Raging anger,
No you've never been truly mine,
But if you were, yes if you were, I wouldn't want you anyway.

Comments

[popstarkiller.livejournal.com]

gee dood. What's up with that?

it's pretty much what it looks like

[niralisse.livejournal.com]

don't worry too much, they're "just" lyrics (which, as I now know, are a little different than what I thought).

Just some memories that boil to the surface now and then...

Re: it's pretty much what it looks like

[popstarkiller.livejournal.com]

I see.... I thought it was something you had come up with.

Re: it's pretty much what it looks like

[niralisse.livejournal.com]

Nope. It's not really my style. I actually did write a real poem on the same memory, though. Feel free to critique that. :)

Re: it's pretty much what it looks like

[popstarkiller.livejournal.com]

Hey, are you in Utah? My time stamp here in Hotmail is reading this as being sent Utah time. I kinda doubt you are, but seeing as you had gone to Eastern Washington (ugh) for vacation, I don't think Utah (uuuuuggghhh) is much far off. Maybe Hotmail is just whacked.

Re: it's pretty much what it looks like

[niralisse.livejournal.com]

Sounds like my mail server is confused. I'll let the owner know.